Week 4B

During the in class mini critique it was suggested that the red was too harsh and a yellow was suggested. To the left are the screenshots I did with the quick color change. I do agree that this works better; it is more readable and almost has a glow to it. We did debate which composition worked best but it all depends on how the motion works out. The lower is a more dynamic 2D piece but would it be confusing in motion? That is something I'll need to address during my process .






The rest of class was spent developing my story board in my sketchbook. So far it has been more thought than sketch.  So much of it will be done out of class.